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dingoroo
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Registered: Aug 2004
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help me with my story PLEASE

Salua is running away from sumthing obviusly, but what? Im stuck, i dont no how to contiue it yet, please help


As Salua ran uncomfortably through the beach, the sight of the happy children made her sad on this summer’s day. She had been running for 20 minutes and was already feeling out of breath, her body urging her to stop, her mind begging her to keep on; she collapsed on the sand and lay there until she felt strong enough to continue.
I wish i were two, what I would give to be that cute, that innocent, and that happy once again. Oh how I envy you sweet child!
Lately, those same words ran through her head every time she saw an infant, the warmth that she once felt at seeing a toddlers smile had gradually turned into a pool of ice and jealousy. But she knew she couldn’t turn back the hands of time and only destined to get older; hoping and dreaming could no longer help her.

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